Why have things changed so much ???
Why has everyone moved so far???
She says people still care...
So why dont I feel it anymore???
Why has everyone deserted me???
All alone when I needed them the most...
And when not one not two but everyone is deserting me....
The only person to be blamed is me I know....
Something is seriously wrong with me.....
Please anyone tell me why is it so ....
Deserted me everyone has...
However much she says no...:(
I know...the poem is too bad to call it a poem...no rhyming etc etc etc ...so sue me.....but I dont give a damn...thats how I am feeling right now and I love it coz it tells my position so very perfectly
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hmmm.. ..chota muh badi baat lekin baat toh karni padegi.. itna force jo kiya mujhe kisine :d..
all alone is wat u c n wat u want to c.. ..!! turn around.. therez a world standing for u!! :-) jus have a positive look n den everythings is urz.. :).. .look whoz talking.. :P.. .kisi mahan insan ne aisa mujhe kaha tha :p
vaise nice poem.. :)
hmmm....lonesome.....welcome 2 the family! :(
btw i ask u one thing... if this is the price for all the sweet and happy moments u had....is it too much?
the light always follows the darkness dear.....u just need to wait for the change....... who am i kidding !
look every1 goes this ......mine is going on from the last god damn dunno how many years......so atleast u have the blog to vent ur feelings :)
god bless ! :)
poetry isnt sumthin bout rhymin wurz or cliched phrases deeds...wen u do tht intentionally its a children's rhyme ur writin...or a rap...wen its outta ur hrt...no matter it rhymes or nt..no matter its wurz r differnt or not...its poetry all da same...shakespeare used 2 write in blank verses 2...
dis stuff here is very emotional...gud 4 me...coz i'm easily able 2 relate to it...after all meri 5 me se 3 poems to gothic hoti hain!!
bt tht brings out 1 question...why? kya ho gya deeds ko? summin wrong? i'v noticed dis pain in ur wurz as r here only once b4...tht ws lst yr wen sum1 betrayed ur trust sumhow...n i dun lyk da signs...no matter how attracted i'm being 2wrds dis poem...
hey comon datz a beautiful poem.... yeah it iz..... u hv xprsd a lot in in :)
n comon der aint nethin rong in u.... evry1 iz gng thru a bad phase dese dayzz n trust me on dat....
no 1 hz desrtd ya.... ab hw shd i mk u undrstnd..... :(
how bout givin her a choco cake :P:P
oh andy choco cake usko :s mereko bhi chahiye :s k koi nahi isko dekar phr le lenge wapas ;)
oye!! tere ko to roz choco cake deti hai naa deeds...confused?!! well am talkin bout DIS blog duffr :P
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