As he was leaving she called out from behind..."Rahul!!!" Rahul turned back waiting.....surprised to see her eyes shining with something that suspiciously looked like tears
She said "Its good to have you around again". She got flustered realising what had she just now admitted and murmuring cya tomorrow she turned to go.So she could not see the look of utter disbelief and then the softening of Rahul's features with a soft smile drifting across his face
Well this is my ending.Dont know if it does justice to the original story written.Actually it was really hard to come up with a decent ending from my side because everyones ending were just too good.And I know this dosent match any single one of them :)Thanks to everyone for showing so much curiosity in my weird story writing attempt :p and I loved each and every endings given as comments.Too hard to choose just one :)
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Knew it ...Shaivya ma'am will come up with something different ..and here she is ...with the ending ..which is simple and graceful ..[ as i already said that ...but kuch logon ko yakeen nahi hota ...isliye double chk kar lo .. fir se bol diya ..:d ]...
well ending is short ...but ...had no shortage of feelings ....if there where tears ... there was smile too ... a feeling of confusion and excitement ...and ...to add something to it ....the utter disbelief ..
in all ...sameer babu ....badhiya hai :p...:d...ooppsss .. i mean ..shaviya ma'am ..badhiya hai ...:)
soiiee .....shaivya * ..:|
aur aur ..mujhe pata tha ..meri di hui ending toh use karni hi nahi thi ..:(...* sniff sniff * ... mere se janam janam ki dushmani jo hai ...:((((( ..:P..:D
lolzz arjun.....:P:d......
shaviya mam...dats good!!!....
i mean simple bt said everythng...conveyed all....wid those tears n dat smile..:)...its gr88 feelin...:)...becoz it speaks all...jus need to understand....:)..
n arjun....u wrote sumthng diffrent....n i think its ur way of thinkin...which ws again a diffrent n spl one.....i liked urs too..:)
arre i said na i luved all cudnt choose jst 1 all wre diff bt conveyed dere emotions in dere own sweet way n thnx taru n arjun :)
oppsss sorry for late reply
was busy a bit:D:D:D:D
hmm shaivya jii got one word for it only
"MARVOLOUS"
u know dis thing..........particular i was loooking for...and still loooking in reality........u made dis ending touch ma heart....confused...even i was...why its means to me in reality i dont know......shyaad kbhi jaan bhi na sakooon.....challloo koi naa
very goood shiavya jii
u deserves a applause:):):):)
hey datz realy chwwweeet n simple... :)
its realy touchin n smwhr touchd d chords deep inside :)
chalo thank god u compltd warna mujhe likhna padta :P
ty venus mujhe nahi laga tha it wud luk so gud :)
@ lucky ohho abhi tak apni ending to di nahi badi aayi likhne waali lol
i wz talkin abt ma endin only lolzz :P
acha 'l ryt sson ;) :P
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